Friday, 22 November 2013

A Moment in Time

We wrote these thoughts as if we were looking out of the window of an aeroplane.
My Adventure in a Plane
I can hear the pilot talking to us.  His voice is loud and croaky.
I can see some small houses and some fluffy clouds.
I feel happy because it is my first time in a plane.
I wonder how they drive the sparkly plane?

By Tyler O
The Amazing Plane
I can hear the small propellers on the side.
I can see the metal wing.
I feel confident because I know the pilot won’t crash.
I wonder what is going on in the blue, shiny sea down below?
By Reuben
The Magic Plane
I can hear the rumbling when I’m landing on the ground.
I can see the fluffy, white clouds and the tiny houses and the white plane wing.
I can see the sparkling sea.
I feel sad and nervous because we might crash land.
I wonder what is in the shiny, blue sea?
By Juel
The Jetting Plane
I can hear the rumbling engine.
When we land I will hear the bumping aeroplane.
I can see the fluffy, sparkling clouds.
I feel excited because there are ipads on the squishy seat.
I wonder how they drive the Air New Zealand plane?
By Louie
My Get Away
I can hear the noise of the screeching wheels.
I can see the white wing of the plane.
I feel the plane tipping.
I wonder when the plane is going to stop?
I wonder what it is like to be a pilot?
By Jerzy

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